A Song for Christmas 2

My previous post 'A Song for Christmas' introduced the theory behind creating a Christmas single and expounded the benefits to the pupils of sharing their work online. The chosen medium was iTunes to allow the pupils to relate to the sharing and to help them contextualise the process. The decision was made to put a normal iTunes price of 79p on the track, raising funds for play equipment. However in the nature of true sharing, and with hope of more feedback to share with the school I have included a sample of the track below:



Please comment on the song, and if you are feeling particularly generous go to iTunes and download the full track. Raising self esteem merits above raising cash so a comment will be greatly appreciated.